O For A Thousand Tongues To Sing chords & tabs

Alright this is a great song...but my first time tabbing...no one else has tabbed
this song..this is 99% right...tune your guitar E,A,E,E,B,E and a capo on the 3rd
fret


E|-------------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|-------------------------------------------------------------------------|
E|-------------------------------------------------------------------------|
E|--0-0--0-0---0---0--0--0--0--0--0--0--0---0--0---0--0---0----------------|
B|--8-8--8H10-P10--12-12-10-12-13-13-12-10--10H12-P12P10--8----------------|
E|--0-0--0-0---0---0--0--0--0--0--0--0--0---0--0---0--0---0----------------|

Repeat that-

E|----------------------------------------------------------------|
A|--10-10--12--14-14--12--14-15-15-15-14-12-----------------------|

First of all, sorry this is only the intro! I'm desperate to get some
feedback that i'm going in the right direction though, and I think this is
much closer to the recording than the existing tab.
I AM WORKING ON THE REST OF THE TAB! and the second part of the riff repeats
itself every few bars and is the outro, so please try not to despair too much!
One last comment, learn this slowly, play it as open as you can and listen
to how David plays it as I'm not 100% on the hammers/pull offs.
I'd REALLY appreciate all the feedback you can give!

Key: G
Tuning: EBEEAE - G goes down, D goes up (VERY SLOWLY!)
Capo 3
Timing: 3/4

E----------------------------------|
B-5--5-7-9--7-9-10--10-9-7--9-7-5--|