Stranger chords & tabs

well, here it is, my first tab, I totally Love this song and only spent maybe an hour 
it so, please rate well! :)

Just a note, wherever I put a ~ after a note, that means to hold it out.  and when I say 
or 3X8 hat means to play the number 16 times or 8 times in a row.

SecondHand Serenade: Stranger
bass tab
tuning: standard EADG

Bass comes in at 0:54 with held out notes
|-----------------------------|                         |-------------|
|---------5~---------3~-3~-5~-|                         |-------------|
|--3~-----------5-------------|                         |-3~-----3~---|
|-----------------------------|                         |-------------|
        (X2)

Title: Stranger
Artist: Secondhand Serenade
Tabbed by: Carlo Guzmán, from Philippines (16 yrs old.)


Intro:

e|--3-22--3-22--2---3-33--3-33--3---|
B|--3-33--3-33--3---3-33--3-33--3---|
G|--2-22--2-22--2---0-00--0-00--0---|
D|--0-00--0-00--0---0-00--0-00--0---|
A|--x-xx--x-xx--x---2-22--2-22--2---|
E|--x-xx--x-xx--x---3-33--3-33--3---|


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this is my own version of "Stranger" by Secondhand Serenade.
i made a tab on the intro of this song because i like this song.
i tried to look for a tab on this but unfortunately i haven`t found one. 
so i made the tab on my own.
i hope you guys would like it. 
 
INTRO (piano converted to guitar)
e|------------------------------------------------|
b|-6-6---5-5---6-6---5-5----8-8---6-6---8-8---6-6-|
g|-----5-----5-----5------5-----5-----5-----5-----|
d|------------------------------------------------|
a|------------------------------------------------|
E|------------------------------------------------|

e|------------------------------------------------|
b|-5h6-5-5-6-5-5-----8-6-6-8-6-6-5----------------|