Song To The Siren Guitar tab

I first heard this song on youtube, from a clip on the Monkees TV show. I wanted to
it but I couldn't find a decent enough tab, so I did it myself. This is my first tab, so I
apriciate some feed back and possibly some of the picking patterns.
Email me at gazzaday@aol.com if you have any suggestions about this tab.
Thanks

Capo 2nd Fret, Standard Tuning

C (9 fr.):E-0-  G/B:E-0-
B-3-      B-3-
G-0-      G-0-
D-0-      D-0-
A-3-      A-2-
E-x-      E-x-

Intro

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Date: Thu, 30 Apr 1998 11:11:03 -0400
From: Dann Butterfield 
Subject: b/buckley_tim/song_to_the_siren.crd

Song To The Siren
(Tim Buckley)

TIM BUCKLEY
>From Starsailor, 1971

Verse 1:

Song To The Siren
(Tim Buckley)
From Starsailor, 1971
Capo 1
Verse 1:
A          E
Long afloat on shipless oceans
D          F#m
I did all my best to smile
A                E
'Til your singing eyes and fingers
D            F#m
Drew me loving to your isle
A         
And you sang
G          D

Song To The Siren
(Tim Buckley)
Original Folk version 1968

Intro C#m, B, A

Verse 1:
E                B
Long afloat on shipless oceans
A          C#m
I did all my best to smile
E                 B
'Til your singing eyes and fingers
A              C#m
Drew me loving    to your isle
E