Nightmare Bass tab

Intro

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Intro 2

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Hello!
First, I apologize for my English because I am Brazilian.
A while ago, I did this same song tablatures, Nightmare, the band Avenged Sevenfold, and
realized that I failed a few times, but even so, all you gave me five stars.
Now, I made new Tabs and during this time, I managed to improve them successfully.
After seeing it, comment which one is better. Thanks, and again, excuse the English.

Intro

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Artist: Avenged Sevenfold
Album: Nightmare
Instrument: Guitar
Tabbed By: Many Of People
Compiled By: Thommoboy


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All songs written and composed by Sanders/Haner/Seward/Baker/Sullivan.

Standard Single Disc Edition[21][22]
No. Title Length
1. "Nightmare"   6:14 - rafseu
2. "Welcome to the Family"   4:06 - VintageBassline
3. "Danger Line"   5:28 - VintageBassline